Tuesday, March 3, 2015

revision 2nd draft

I really need to focus on a lot of things to get my revision done. I need to be able to create a thesis and argue it with specific organized axes paragraphs.  my main problem i didn't have the correct
formatting. I really need to focus on how my arguments are organized and stuff. I need to correct a lot of run on sentences and errors. One of my other big problems was the citing my sources in my body paragraphs after the facts that I used.

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